I don't like either of them, but I'm not a VC! I find the following things annoying and distracting: repetitive music, fast moving text, text keeps moving aroun

I don't like either of them, but I'm not a VC! I find the following things annoying and distracting: repetitive music, fast moving text, text keeps moving around the screen so it's hard to read. For some reason, I felt stressed watching the video, really having to focus hard to find out your core message. I think a simple narration with the website itself in the video would be a lot more effective in getting your point across. [Edit]: As per the YC app guideline, I'd at least do away with the whole suspense building and state the idea clearly in the first 10 seconds. There was a really good mixergy interview where a top entrepreneur gave very good step-by-step tips on how to pitch to a VC. But I can't remember who it was! If you have time, it might be worth emailing Andrew Warner or searching through the site.