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I will a/b test the buttons. I have a feeling there'll be a lot less left by the time I'm done with it :). I'll play around with the color. Perhaps adding subt

I will a/b test the buttons. I have a feeling there'll be a lot less left by the time I'm done with it :). I'll play around with the color. Perhaps adding subtle shadows will help.

ljm 8y ago
I want to chime in and say that, while I like the product itself (seems pretty cool), having the call to action after literally every paragraph of text feels desperate to me. It's like you can't speak a sentence without saying 'are ya gonna buy it yet?'. And if you asked me what would hook me in a bit better, I think it would be to flesh out the header above the fold first so it has a stronger impact and obviates the need to go in as much detail further down the page. For another example, the graphic doesn't appear so clear and the main text doesn't feel very prominent. I feel like it lacks a sense of physicality that I'd want to feel from seeing a screen being shared to another device (a screenshot doesn't really hit the spot for me).
- checker659 8y ago
  > having the call to action after literally every paragraph of text feels desperate to me Sorry about that. I'll reconsider the placement of the buttons. > I think it would be to flesh out the header above the fold As in, alluding to the fact that ScreenTime imitates an external webcam and things like that? > I feel like it lacks a sense of physicality that I'd want to feel from seeing a screen being shared Would putting the screenshots inside a monitor help? What about animating the screenshot? Like a gif of the two users doing things on their own screens? Thanks for taking the time. I appreciate it :)
  - ljm 8y ago
    I'm not comfortable giving you a specific solution because I'm just telling you what I personally feel, and it's up to you to receive the feedback from me and the others offering it and decide how you want to address it. It's feedback, not advice. Truly, I don't know what exactly I'd prefer from you because I don't know you or your product in any intimate way, so while I might tell you what I would have liked to see it doesn't mean I know that it's overall better than what you have.
    - checker659 8y ago
      Fair enough. Thanks nonetheless.

I will a/b test the buttons. I have a feeling there'll be a lot less left by the time I'm done with it :). I'll play around with the color. Perhaps adding subtle shadows will help.

ljm 8y ago

I want to chime in and say that, while I like the product itself (seems pretty cool), having the call to action after literally every paragraph of text feels desperate to me. It's like you can't speak a sentence without saying 'are ya gonna buy it yet?'. And if you asked me what would hook me in a bit better, I think it would be to flesh out the header above the fold first so it has a stronger impact and obviates the need to go in as much detail further down the page. For another example, the graphic doesn't appear so clear and the main text doesn't feel very prominent. I feel like it lacks a sense of physicality that I'd want to feel from seeing a screen being shared to another device (a screenshot doesn't really hit the spot for me).

checker659 8y ago
> having the call to action after literally every paragraph of text feels desperate to me Sorry about that. I'll reconsider the placement of the buttons. > I think it would be to flesh out the header above the fold As in, alluding to the fact that ScreenTime imitates an external webcam and things like that? > I feel like it lacks a sense of physicality that I'd want to feel from seeing a screen being shared Would putting the screenshots inside a monitor help? What about animating the screenshot? Like a gif of the two users doing things on their own screens? Thanks for taking the time. I appreciate it :)
- ljm 8y ago
  I'm not comfortable giving you a specific solution because I'm just telling you what I personally feel, and it's up to you to receive the feedback from me and the others offering it and decide how you want to address it. It's feedback, not advice. Truly, I don't know what exactly I'd prefer from you because I don't know you or your product in any intimate way, so while I might tell you what I would have liked to see it doesn't mean I know that it's overall better than what you have.
  - checker659 8y ago
    Fair enough. Thanks nonetheless.