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Eh, the writing is not that good. Not a lot of history either. Reads like a column in your local paper.

• MrRubbish 8y ago
  Correct, pretty rubbish.
• grendelt 8y ago
  Yeah, the unnecessary inclusion of his cheese road trip and awkward crashing at a friend's place in the middle of a divorce was pretty odd. Save the human angle and focus on this history. It's far more interesting to the reader.