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Removing the company's unofficial motto, and mixing it in with a random sentence at the very end is 'more prominent'. Hmm.. I'll believe Oceania has always bee

• dragonwriter 8y ago
  > Removing the company's unofficial motto, and mixing it in with a random sentence at the very end is 'more prominent'. It wasn't mixed in (the article itself notes it was retained unchanged) and the final sentence isn't a random placement but, along with the first, one of the two most significant places in a long document of this type—the beginning is where you put meant you want to shape the reading of the rest, the end is where you put the most important high-level key takeaway. > Also using "nothingburger", a prominent phrase used by Trump supporters to lampoon the Muller investigation I've actually never noticed in that context, apparently it's a big thing on Twitter in that context, but I'm quite selective of my consumption in that channel. But the terms been in use for 60+ years. > You have a strange agenda, friend. What agenda is that, then?
  • rando444 8y ago
    I have no idea what your agenda is, but trying to say that removing all references of the companies former official motto and mixing it in at the very end of a sentence of their core of conduct somehow makes it "more prominent" is literal nonsense. One hopes you have an agenda.