Whatever one thinks about the subject matter, the writing in this piece is awful. You can get the substance of what the writer is saying by skipping 90% of the

Whatever one thinks about the subject matter, the writing in this piece is awful. You can get the substance of what the writer is saying by skipping 90% of the content. Moreover, the tone is talking down at the audience - unless that audience is already excited about gdpr. This comes across as not being interested in convincing anyone but in cheerleading their position.