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Not that this isn't an interesting read (albeit mostly a lengthy rationalization of shared trauma) but they really need some better editors over at Esquire — sp
by bazeblackwood 8y ago
Not that this isn't an interesting read (albeit mostly a lengthy rationalization of shared trauma) but they really need some better editors over at Esquire — spelling, spacing and grammatical errors everywhere.
Edit: there appears also in the text, frequently, the world "tile" as an adjective. "tile night" "tile blackness" "tile war". Methinks someone needs a better find + replace regex.
- noonespecial 8y agoLoos like a poor OCR of a previous text. All they really needed was a proofreader. Why they didn't even bother is the real question.
- robotresearcher 8y agoI can’t tell if that was funny on purpose or not.
- bazeblackwood 8y agoNevermind, I just finished the second half. A bit necrophilic if you ask me. Author would probably be a lot less romantic were he to come back with life and not limb.
- burfog 8y ago"til" in many cases should be "th" "m" in many cases should be "rn"