Your list sounds a bit corporate-y, but certainly not objectionable. As a guess, if there's a problem with you specifically, it's not anything you're mentionin

Your list sounds a bit corporate-y, but certainly not objectionable. As a guess, if there's a problem with you specifically, it's not anything you're mentioning here. Maybe send your cover letter and resume to a trusted confidante or two and ask for some very frank feedback. Aside from that, keep trying. It only takes one satisfactory offer.