OP - I took the liberty of critiquing your landing page with a Before and After on my personal blog. It's here - https://ramachandr.in/cb/#indemandly https://ra

OP - I took the liberty of critiquing your landing page with a Before and After on my personal blog. It's here - https://ramachandr.in/cb/#indemandly https://ramachandr.in/cb/#indemandly (it's a self hosted gif and some text; not trying to sign you up for anything) tl;dw;dr; I made the following choices in the modified version- - Replaced the weak sounding "new best" with "BEST". - Converted the blob of undifferentiated text into a list with a list heading - Got to "YOU" asap in the list heading. - Encouraged people to take action by moving the soft feel good statement below the CTA and highlighting it.