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I like the concept and implementation of the proposed improvements, but I think it starts off a bit too slow - lots of repetition in 2 through 6. The reader doe

I like the concept and implementation of the proposed improvements, but I think it starts off a bit too slow - lots of repetition in 2 through 6. The reader doesn't know what's coming, so you're asking a lot for them to sit through those "boring" bits. Also, information on how to deploy this concept on other sites might also be useful, especially given the venue. Maybe even use the project itself as the tutorial?

matthiaswh 8y ago
You're absolutely right! As someone who does marketing for a living I'm completely unsatisfied with the "pitch." But I had to get over the mental block of publishing this and go live with something that isn't yet perfect. Appreciate the feedback. My next step is to publish a couple small tutorials so there are more live examples of the concept.