> Reduce your use of the first personal pronoun. This seems out of place. Expressing my beliefs as a function of my experiences and understanding, is a fundame

> Reduce your use of the first personal pronoun. This seems out of place. Expressing my beliefs as a function of my experiences and understanding, is a fundamental step in adulthood (along with pragmatically taking charge of your life). Many of the other steps, listed, require the understanding that your views are that and not some other abstract truth.