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Very cool presentation. Perhaps change "I got deep knowledge" to "I have deep knowledge"? Good luck finding a gig!
by hapnin 9y ago
Very cool presentation. Perhaps change "I got deep knowledge" to "I have deep knowledge"?
Good luck finding a gig!
- matte_black 9y agoThis should be fixed ASAP, I noticed it right away and it turned me off to seeing the rest of it.
- kzrdude 9y agoAnother language fix I would use: "I truly believe" -> "I believe" or "I am convinced". Avoid weasel words like "truly" and let the value words like "believe" stand alone, or pick a stronger value word if needed ("convinced").