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"But please don't say none of us is bold." I think you take things a bit too literally. This piece is about humanity in general, not "edw519"
by hank777 19y ago
"But please don't say none of us is bold."
I think you take things a bit too literally. This piece is about humanity in general, not "edw519"
- edw519 19y agoYou're right, Hank. I guess I just took a little creative license myself. It felt good.
- brlewis 19y agoOne thing I've learned from watching people react to various essays, is that if they can read it as being about them, they will. You would be well advised to say "few" instead of "none" if you don't want to raise the ire of the few.
- edw519 19y ago"if they can read it as being about them, they will" That means you've reached them. Good job.