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I couldn't get past the first "sentence". Don't write the way you speak.
by praeclarum 16y ago
I couldn't get past the first "sentence". Don't write the way you speak.
- eldenbishop 16y agoNot sure why your being down-voted. I had to re-read the first few sentences at least four times before I could understand what he was trying to say. It was a horribly constructed opening that almost made me abandon the article.