i also enjoyed reading the deleted parts. obviously pg is aiming for "terse" in most of his essays. but if he left in a few of the diversions, personal feelin

i also enjoyed reading the deleted parts. obviously pg is aiming for "terse" in most of his essays. but if he left in a few of the diversions, personal feelings, reactions to others, etc, he would seem more human. fewer people would have the occasional violent negative reactions to him that we've been seeing lately.