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Loved the writing, am guilty myself though.

• ForRealsies 9y ago
  Really? I lost interest between a gratuitous comma and needless metaphor.
  • carlmr 9y ago
    Yes, although I did notice a stray homophone(pedal/peddle) and a non-sensical sentence, I thought the writing was funny and original.
  • ataturk 9y ago
    I quit after the needless Trump bash. Well, okay, one paragraph later where the reason for travel bans was well laid out.
• quickConclusion 9y ago
  Guilty too, but the writing was the main point to me: "I’m not saying your seat is small, but if it were a haystack, you’d find the needle"