I thought it fit the character. I'm not really fond of shallans parts of the story, although I do think they are getting better, but dialogue like that was not

I thought it fit the character. I'm not really fond of shallans parts of the story, although I do think they are getting better, but dialogue like that was not out of place. If I recall correctly she has quite a bit of internal worrying and external commentary about how she constantly talks like that, and views it as a negative near the beginning of the books