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(I suck at this so take with a grain of salt and it's only my opinion) Off the top of my head: 1) Yes, but had to read the whole page to really grasp the conce
by vhodges 9y ago
(I suck at this so take with a grain of salt and it's only my opinion) Off the top of my head:
1) Yes, but had to read the whole page to really grasp the concept.
2) It's fine as far as it goes, but nothing that Quora, Reddit and/or Stackoverflow don't already provide in someway.
3) Changes I'd make:
- "Start making better (smarter?) decisions" should be the tag line.
- The Picture and the copy beside it should be the hero section.
- Nobody cares about features, they care about benefits so drop this for now or rewrite to show why they might matter to the reader.
- "What makes us special" is probably not needed.
- At this stage, you probably just need a hero section and lead capture form.