Just trying to help. I'm not an English major or anything myself, but here is one issue I noticed. Don't overuse commas. After you get a complete idea out ther

Just trying to help. I'm not an English major or anything myself, but here is one issue I noticed. Don't overuse commas. After you get a complete idea out there, just end and start a new sentence. For example: "Please let me know how I can improve my phrasing and what mistakes I made. I am not a native speaker, so I am aware I can build my phrases in a weird way."