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Something about your phrasing reminded me of the customer reviews for the "three wolves" t-shirt on Amazon [1]. Thanks for brightening my day! [1] https://www

• simion314 9y ago
  please let me know how can I improve my phrasing, what mistakes I made, I am not a native speaker so I am aware I can build my phrases in a weird way.
  • devthane 9y ago
    Just trying to help. I'm not an English major or anything myself, but here is one issue I noticed. Don't overuse commas. After you get a complete idea out there, just end and start a new sentence. For example: "Please let me know how I can improve my phrasing and what mistakes I made. I am not a native speaker, so I am aware I can build my phrases in a weird way."
    • simion314 9y ago
      Good to know, thanks.
  • AareyBaba 9y ago
    The book that really help me gain confidence in writing is https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/The_Elements_of_Style https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/The_Elements_of_Style. It is a small book that can be read in an afternoon - you can probably find pdfs online.