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> tl;dr - I made it about two paragraphs in before I started skimming. It's a rambling an uninteresting rant against the self-help industry, which ends with a r
by thwawaywaq23498 9y ago
> tl;dr - I made it about two paragraphs in before I started skimming. It's a rambling an uninteresting rant against the self-help industry, which ends with a recommendation for another self-help book. I fail to see what point the author is trying to make.
An essay of this length should communicate something that is not necessarily digestible into a single point. In fact, it's arguable that a good essay cannot be summarized into a single point, and that the entire article needs to be taken as a whole before the full nuance of what it's attempting to convey can be understood. Sometimes "the point" is difficult to articulate and that, in my opinion, is something to be desired across all artistic forms.
I see this sort of criticism on the internet very often, as if people expect writers to create digestible, elementary essays that they can only vaguely engage with and still walk away with something to agree or disagree with. Personally, I demand more of both the writing I read on the internet, as well as myself.
Not to defend this particular essay too hard, but the conclusion does the exact opposite of recommend another self help book. Literally the final paragraph is the shrugging off of self-help books entirely.
- goodroot 9y agoI agree with you, poster. I'm baffled as to why you felt you needed a throw-away, though. If you don't think you can speak in earnest within this community, it probably isn't healthy for any of us to be here. Back to your point, though, I think that the mark of an effective essay on the Internet is whether or not it drums up interesting conversation. This one has.
- jcadam 9y ago> I agree with you, poster. I'm baffled as to why you felt you needed a throw-away, though. I know, this isn't a political topic, we should be able to have a reasonable discussion :) In any case, I like a good long-form essay on occasion - this one definitely failed to 'hook' me in the intro.
- mkirklions 9y agoAs a writer, I disagree with the excuse 'Its an essay it is supposed to prove a point'. There was no 'Hook' in the first 5-7 paragraphs, heck I couldnt really tell what the point of the article was. This IMO was a poorly written article. I thought the points that were made were real, but didnt go back to whatever the heck the main point was. Wonder who's kid the author is.