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Here's my attempt after reading the article: open the lid bits of tissue all over my laundy
by tannercollin 9y ago
Here's my attempt after reading the article:
open the lid
bits of tissue all over
my laundy
- andrewflnr 9y agoUnconventional, but effective IMO. You definitely brought me into the moment with you.
- Cerium 9y agoI rather like your haiku as well. In particular I enjoy how the second and third line can be read together and apart. It seems to reinforce the disappointment of finding your laundry in such a state.