Had a quick glance and it seems like a good start. Not sure why it hasn't got any upvotes yet. Edit: then again, -a number of other interesting stories are fai

Had a quick glance and it seems like a good start. Not sure why it hasn't got any upvotes yet. Edit: then again, -a number of other interesting stories are failing today. Maybe try again in a few days and maybe even contact the mods; I think they might help you if you have a good story.