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Article started off well and nothing seemed to be wrong with it except it was quite long and couldn’t keep me engaged until the end. Sorry - honest feedback!
by jarym 9y ago
Article started off well and nothing seemed to be wrong with it except it was quite long and couldn’t keep me engaged until the end. Sorry - honest feedback!
- Fnoord 9y agoTo be fair it does say on top: 25 min read (feature of Medium).
- heliodor 9y agoOP is onto something. While there's nothing wrong with a long article, structure becomes important. The argument structure, choice of headlines, first sentence of each paragraph, paragraph length, etc, make all the difference between keeping your readers engaged or losing them partway.