FWIW, I liked this format. It reads like a presentation and digresses and regroups back to the main thread throughout. It may make it less widely read but I thi

FWIW, I liked this format. It reads like a presentation and digresses and regroups back to the main thread throughout. It may make it less widely read but I think it may also make it more memorable and loved. The value for the reader is in the act of chewing over a familiar problem along with your guidance. If the main points were made more obvious, then perhaps it also becomes more boring. If you want to propose a more tangible recommendation/guide/process then yeah, give people hooky, easy to remember bits.