I wouldn't give up on a page like that. That stuff works, though there's a lot of ground you're not covering. One element to test: a subhead near the end that

I wouldn't give up on a page like that. That stuff works, though there's a lot of ground you're not covering. One element to test: a subhead near the end that says "Yes, There's a Catch..." (where the 'catch' is that you have to fill out the form now in order to sign up before the cost goes up). There are a couple other improvements you could make. Email's in the profile, if you'd like to discuss.