Good read, and right to the point. Our idea is great but our first presentation was loaded down with “buzzword-laden socialist hippie kumbaya bullshit” and we

Good read, and right to the point. Our idea is great but our first presentation was loaded down with “buzzword-laden socialist hippie kumbaya bullshit” and we failed to explain the core business value proposition on the first slide. If you want my money, I need to know what you can do for me, and how.