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A couple suggestions: The tagline "The Online Small Business Management Solution" doesn't scream bookkeeping to me. If I hadn't read your HN post to know this
by jbail 16y ago
A couple suggestions:
The tagline "The Online Small Business Management Solution" doesn't scream bookkeeping to me. If I hadn't read your HN post to know this is primarily a bookkeeping app, I would have never known.
Also, trim down the list on the right of the homepage (the one with Accounting, Invoicing, etc). It's overwhelming to look at and you could use that space to draw people into your call to action...Sign Up Now (which is hidden below the fold).
- vinhboy 16y agoThanks for the suggestions. I am not a fan of the tagline either, but I may be over simplifying by saying we do "bookkeeping", we have a lot more than that.
- petervandijck 16y agoYes, but you should still have 1 focus. Don't worry that you can't explain everything in the tagline, "bookkeeping" is much better than "management". You have to be specific. You'll get a chance to explain all the other wonderful stuff later :)