Though the author might be right, as an outsider I have a hard time believing his words tell the only thruth. When you start the blame game like this you better

Though the author might be right, as an outsider I have a hard time believing his words tell the only thruth. When you start the blame game like this you better include some actual conversations instead of telling the reader you did them a favor and rephrased them in your own words (state of mind!) for them. Anyone can write a piece like this. An honest victim or the neighbour's 13 yo spoiled script kiddo. So word of advice. If you want to have true impact rewrite your piece to include conversations and other relevant discussion material that led to this exclamation of frustration; because you might be totally right.