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Your current copy tells something very real and concrete to the user, gives him valid information. It is useful. All suggestions in this thread ("it is secure!
by fiatjaf 9y ago
Your current copy tells something very real and concrete to the user, gives him valid information. It is useful.
All suggestions in this thread ("it is secure!") are just marketing gibberish, slogans without any meaning. If you intend to appeal to a large, stupid audience, maybe they're good, but it is a little dishonest.
- 2474 9y agoWhile you are right, it wouldn't be that great of an idea for Honda to market their new airbags by saying "Next time you get into that accident, at least your face won't be smashed into a million pieces by your wind shield!". While what he has is fine, you can convey the same sentiment without saying "Even if we get hacked..."
- fiatjaf 9y agoOk, but you don't have to say evasive things like "Honda airbags adds the safeness of air to your driving".