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Very nicely presented! A few spelling and phrasing suggestions: s/in order and independents/in order and independent/; s/Multiplataform/Multiplatform/;
by lainproliant 9y ago
Very nicely presented! A few spelling and phrasing suggestions:
s/in order and independents/in order and independent/;
s/Multiplataform/Multiplatform/;
s/Have you got any doubt?/Questions? Ask us!/;
s/you’ll must have a user account/you must have a user account/;
- barreiros 9y agoThanks for the suggestions - I have to improve my english :-) I'm glad to read you.