I'm going to sound a bit negative, but the site is not very nice. It's not 'sexy' enough to sell the service. Not that it shows much of it to anyway. I'll writ

I'm going to sound a bit negative, but the site is not very nice. It's not 'sexy' enough to sell the service. Not that it shows much of it to anyway. I'll write an unordered list of thoughts about it. - Focus. meet. goals. Is it an introduction like "Peter, meet Claire" or is it a misspelling of "focus meets goal". Nitpicking but the more I thought about it the less clear it became and now I want answers :) - The huge image is kinda low res. - Why is there a bird? This bird could be the logo, could be slick. - I don't understand the logo, is it a bullseye or a signal? Why is the Ooo becoming smaller into the dot? - The headers and text, size and color is all over the place. Like: 1. "Agile in the essence" is white and large like the header, "Vision" but it's not a header, it's inspirational .. stuff 2. I count like 100 colors, backgrounds and font sizes. 3. Too much green text 4. Spelling errors, like "..in intuitive way" should be "..ways" right? - Misaligned icons and texts (like "[icon] look ahead") etc. - Horribly bad cropped screenshots of the product itself (and the tags in the product looks misaligned in their boxes).. - There's a section of text, again green, with green .. stuff between them, the diamond things. - Spacing is off, Like the "[icon] focus on now" and the screenshot below it. - The product itself screenshot of the kanban, the shadows are really strong. - Contact only through twitter or FB? - Way too much buzzwords, just show me the tool. Anyone interested is likely aware of what it is. I'd have a proper designer take a look at everything, I feel most of these are at least fixable by even just making sure it is more consistent than currently.