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Ask HN: Please critique my landing page
- cherif 16y agoBackground story: http://news.ycombinator.com/item?id=1538987 http://news.ycombinator.com/item?id=1538987
- spooneybarger 16y agoYou are asking people to turn over personal info based on 1 vague line about discounts up to 80%. I think you need to provide a good bit more info- why does this free membership save me money? are they going to send me ads? etc etc etc.
- cherif 16y agoGood points, thanks. Will include link to privacy policy and elaborate more in description. Was trying to cut down the copy to a minimum but I guess I went too far.