IMO opinion, the homepage is great - it covers the headlines. What it is missing is a link to a 'features' page that provides more details on the actual service

IMO opinion, the homepage is great - it covers the headlines. What it is missing is a link to a 'features' page that provides more details on the actual services and benefits. Fundamentally, at this time your market is the more technically minded people who are going to want something a bit more concrete than "Imagine a Slack...".