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1. That's a few paragraphs down, not in the opening sentences. 2. She, not he. Check your reading.
by angersock 9y ago
1. That's a few paragraphs down, not in the opening sentences.
2. She, not he.
Check your reading.
- purplezooey 9y agoTouché, #1 seems a little nitpicky though.