> What exactly does that mean? I meant that it has a lot of parts that don't work well togther: the presentation doesn't match the writing, the writing doesn't

> What exactly does that mean? I meant that it has a lot of parts that don't work well togther: the presentation doesn't match the writing, the writing doesn't match the setting, the slots doesn't evoke a feeling of a contested combat. It feels like a lot of ideas thrown together without an overall vision tying them together. I keep thinging of Inkle's Sorcery! and how well it's put together, or Simogo's Device 6's novel use of text. > a STRIPS planner Well now! I'd love to hear more about this; I didn't notice it in action while running backwards and forwards from the war forges to the corpse room & back while waiting to see if the explicitly-mentioned time-pressure was really a thing or a unconvincing plot momentum device.