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I don't know about 'objectively' but I'd say the mix of the author's story along with the ex-black panther story was slightly off. It seemed like two stories wi
by anitil 9y ago
I don't know about 'objectively' but I'd say the mix of the author's story along with the ex-black panther story was slightly off. It seemed like two stories with vastly different weights ('I was interested in this thing' vs 'I was tracked by the FBI for years').
And the paragraph about the 'Mothers of the Plaza de Mayo' sort of went nowhere - I actually had to go back and try work out why it was there.
But I'm not a journalist or an editor so could just be wrong