I think the girl is fine - but she sends mixed messages - she's trying to explain whiteyboard, but she's trying to be a little bit flirty - there's a long awkwa

I think the girl is fine - but she sends mixed messages - she's trying to explain whiteyboard, but she's trying to be a little bit flirty - there's a long awkward pause at the end that needs to be shortened, and the moustache is really gimmicky. Also, if you stick with the same girl (which I think is totally fine), you should have her wear a more professional outfit (not to sound sexist or anything). What's your biggest potential market? (offices i'm guessing?) You should have her match that - so for offices, maybe business slacks and a professional top. Right now she looks like a college student, which is fine if you're trying to cater for that market.