I think this would have "fixed" this book. I actually liked the major concept shift for the second half. It was totally different and unexpected. But it also f

I think this would have "fixed" this book. I actually liked the major concept shift for the second half. It was totally different and unexpected. But it also felt rushed and really heavy on some of the "sciencey" type descriptions of how various things were possible. If it had been split into two releases, both would probably have done better, but I bet they would have sold less as well. :)