Instant impressions: Page loads too slowly. Too much text. Dislike the name. The text in the yellow is hard to read, why are certain words in an even more yell

Instant impressions: Page loads too slowly. Too much text. Dislike the name. The text in the yellow is hard to read, why are certain words in an even more yellow background? The secondary marketing line isn't quite english: "Probably depends on how good of a designer you are!" I'd change that top bit to say: > Create facebook pages for your clients with our WYSIWYG editor. > A simple one page promotion page on Facebook is easily worth $500 for your clients. Design and sell them with A Plan of Attack today! The problem with your text is that it's challenging and instills doubt. Am I good enough of a designer? Maybe not, oh well lets not bother. You want to say: Is a simple one page promotion page worth $500 to your clients companies? fuck yes - and we let you make them trivially! "sell" is a bad word - especially to designers. Maybe "earn $500 by making your clients facebook landing pages" if that doesn't sound too dodgy. The images on the right are just grey boxes, the login link should be top right. Let me create a page without signing up. (make the demo account auto login and obvious) The sign up button should probably be on the right hand side of the page, i dislike how it turns red (too jarring) The "Aplanofattack is in beta..." paragraph should be added on the sign up page, if not later. Sounds too sketchy on the first page. Reiterate the service is free - on the sign up button. Stick a contact button more obviously on the home page. Kudos for saying "benefits at a glance" and not "Features at a glance" but now remove 80% of the words below that header.