I found this[0] (PDF) to be a good summarized critique of the proposal. This one[1] as well, although it's a bit longer. [0]: https://www.communia-association

I found this[0] (PDF) to be a good summarized critique of the proposal. This one[1] as well, although it's a bit longer. [0]: https://www.communia-association.org/wp-content/uploads/2016/12/COMMUNIAPositionPaperonNewRightsforPressPublishers-final.pdf https://www.communia-association.org/wp-content/uploads/2016... [1]: http://copyright4creativity.eu/wp-content/uploads/2016/12/DCDSM-Article13-C4CFactsheet.pdf http://copyright4creativity.eu/wp-content/uploads/2016/12/DC...