blunt feedback after spending a few minutes looking at it. - Get a better photo, current one makes you look weird, can't tell if it's being arty or just blurry

blunt feedback after spending a few minutes looking at it. - Get a better photo, current one makes you look weird, can't tell if it's being arty or just blurry. - Try to break up wall of text summary, a few line breaks or spaces would do wonders for the readability. - Bullet point skills and responsibilities for your previous and current roles; same for education as well.