Overall, this looks great, but I would consider changing the following: > if you are smart* you will get it. > *not everyone is smart You've just insulted the

Overall, this looks great, but I would consider changing the following: > if you are smart* you will get it. > *not everyone is smart You've just insulted the intelligence of anyone who doesn't manage to understand your explanation. I don't think it's fair to assume a lack of understanding will always be because of a lack of intelligence.