For this conversation? A woman. He should have given that document to a female friend, told her it would probably offend her, and ask for her advice on how to i

For this conversation? A woman. He should have given that document to a female friend, told her it would probably offend her, and ask for her advice on how to improve it. He should have been there and watched her reaction as she read it. the single greatest fault of forums is that they do not give people a chance to read someone else's body language.