Personally I would find it more informative to see specific examples from the memo that illustrate your point, rather than just a general impression. Something

Personally I would find it more informative to see specific examples from the memo that illustrate your point, rather than just a general impression. Something like "the author wrote 'abc', which I consider to be hate speech because..." It's not a burning issue for me, so if you don't have examples, that's fine. I was just hoping to be enlightened a bit on this, but no worries either way.