I don't think this works nearly as well as the 37s version for a couple of reasons. The biggest one is that Taskforce isn't as inherently visual as Draft is, so

I don't think this works nearly as well as the 37s version for a couple of reasons. The biggest one is that Taskforce isn't as inherently visual as Draft is, so you're going to have to work harder to make it visually interesting. There are a bunch of others, though: the Draft page shows Draft in context: pictured on an iPad rendering. That helps to explain what it is. The Draft images are scaled down and at a more normal aspect ratio. Yours are full size and cut off at an awkward aspect ratio to save space. They look really really wide. The Draft page includes a line at the top that says what it is and where to get it in two lines. You don't have either of those. I think the idea has promise (and I really like the Draft page), but there are things that need to be changed for this to work. Add a tagline at the top that says what Taskforce is, what platforms it runs on, and where to get it. People should know there's a beta before they get all the way down the page. Scale the screenshots down, and move them to a more normal 16:10 or 4:3 aspect ratio. Also consider focusing in for some of the screenshots rather than putting the whole thing there: the 'drag and drop to share' screenshot, for example, doesn't focus nearly enough on the dragging and dropping and that gets lost. 37s had an easy time in this respect because their app is very very simple visually, and is a fundamentally visual application. You're going to have to do a bit more work to make your screenshots as interesting. Make sure you have an obvious link back to your site. The 'Taskforce' header at the top isn't very obviously clickable. (And there should be a link back from the bottom of the page, too.) Also, personalize it a bit. There are two lines that really make the Draft page work, in my opinion: "See, there it is in Campfire. That took 3 seconds." "We use it every day. We hope you will too." The Taskforce page is a lot more formal and a lot more boring. And that makes it a lot less memorable in comparison.