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Mostly good advice, except "Change needs feedback." No human talks like that. Change, as the subject of the sentence, "needs feedback?" What will happen when we
by rdiddly 9y ago
Mostly good advice, except "Change needs feedback." No human talks like that. Change, as the subject of the sentence, "needs feedback?" What will happen when we take the feedback and give it to the change? What will the change do with the feedback? And what does the change need the feedback for?
Not all brevity is the soul of wit.
- asveikau 9y agoI do agree that something was lost. How about "for change to happen, we need your feedback"? I think that conveys the message and request accurately and succinctly.
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