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It's more than buries the lede. It starts with a cold open, which is plays up and up... and it turns out it was a borderline entrapment scheme, where a criminal
by azernik 9y ago
It's more than buries the lede. It starts with a cold open, which is plays up and up... and it turns out it was a borderline entrapment scheme, where a criminal on a plea deal offered to burn the place down while wearing a wire.
So, a big fat pile of nothing, plus a narration of the (very real) inter-ethnic and inter-class tensions in the Mission intended to make the story sound more plausible.
Also, can I just add how irresponsible David Campos's role has been in all this?
> “I’m not saying there is arson,” he said. “The fire department tells me there isn’t. They haven’t found evidence of arson.”
> “Have you come across any clues?” I asked.
> “Nothing’s come up,” he said.
> “Are there rumors?”
> “There are comments,” he said. “Like with that fire that happened at the car-repair place.”
> He meant the Rolling Stock tire-shop fire of November 8, 2015. It destroyed the shop and two adjacent apartment buildings, displacing 21 people. Fire investigators ruled this one an accident as well, most likely started by an electrical fault or, again, discarded smoking materials.
> “The owner [James Albera] was sort of, ‘Hey! Now I guess we can go and build condos,’ ” Campos continued. “It was an odd comment that fed into the speculation.”
> Later, I found Albera’s verbatim comments to the media: “It’s terrible. It’s been in the family since 1960.” And then, when asked what he planned to do next: “I’d like to go residential, with stores on the bottom.”
> I e-mailed Albera several times to ask him about what Campos told me. Personally, I didn’t find his response to the fire suspicious. Even so, he didn’t reply.
- Shalomboy 9y agoFor what it's worth, the reporter is the a fairly popular author; he wrote "The Psychopath Test" and "So You've Been Publicly Shamed." He writes the you've shown to serve an argument he's making in his books. I wouldn't be surprised if this article is actually a chapter or a passage from an upcoming book of his. He isn't following proper journalistic writing standards, but he also isn't trying to be a journalist. GQ probably wanted to drive readership to their site and their July 2017 issue, so they asked if Ronson had anything in the works and paid him for the rights to publish an excerpt from his manuscript.
- azernik 9y agoMy thought was actually that the editor had reordered intermediate material in order to make things look worse than the author did :-D