Derek, I think what you've done is great and I wish you the best of luck. I have just one little piece of unqualified advice. In the last couple paragraphs, th

Derek, I think what you've done is great and I wish you the best of luck. I have just one little piece of unqualified advice. In the last couple paragraphs, the blog post felt a little too much like marketing spiel. I get that you're a non-tech (me too) but be aware of that line. It can easily put people off.