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Your description needs work: ServiceBot is a platform for a business to sell their services and automate the administrative tasks such as billing and invoicing
by Mz 9y ago
Your description needs work:
ServiceBot is a platform for a business to sell their services and automate the administrative tasks such as billing and invoicing.
This really gives me no idea what on earth you do. What problem do you solve? What value do you add?
You don't want to say something like "This tablet has an 8 inch screen." You want to say stuff like "This tablet fits handily in your pocket while having a larger than average screen size and is easily readable in full daylight." Your current description is the "8 inch screen" type description. It is not informative and it is not compelling.
You need to find a way to convey to people what you do for them. Time saved. Money earned. Problems solved. Convenience. Portability. Reduced headaches.