Pretty well-written, and I like that he intentionally set up the story as a frame, and didn't forget to come back to it at the end. But check out the pseudo-sk

Pretty well-written, and I like that he intentionally set up the story as a frame, and didn't forget to come back to it at the end. But check out the pseudo-sketchy SEO link tactics on the right sidebar. "Paycheck-stub.com has your information. We try to provide anything related to paycheck stubs we can -- who would have thought that Adecco payroll was in demand? Must be a popular product. Looks like we're providing a gateway for folks interested in using/buying it." Ah, yes. Adecco payroll. That's a product I'd like to use/buy. Also, please pass the Facebook login. It's delicious this time of year.